Pretty good, slow, and kinda boring at parts

Hey dude, cool start to making the song, I think (my personal preference) is that maybe if you sped it up a bit and added some bass to it, it will be much more exciting to listen to, but that Is my personal preference and I thought maybe give it a try and see how you think it sounds =)

if you would like to get back to me, email me at djnovashock@hotmail.com

have fun