Pretty good, slow, and kinda boring at parts
Hey dude, cool start to making the song, I think (my personal preference) is that maybe if you sped it up a bit and added some bass to it, it will be much more exciting to listen to, but that Is my personal preference and I thought maybe give it a try and see how you think it sounds =)
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Sounds good enough. I could always remake this song with the suggestions listed thus far. =)
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